The Marble Run Sequence

Orange Cell Design

Red Cell Design

Green Cell Design

Building up my 'Art Of'

Feedback from the Pitch

• More Kinetic movements
• Labels to be added within the white space of my background - explaining the cell cycle process. This will ensure the the audience know exactly what is going on 
• Less marble run repetition towards the end of the animation
• To proof read my work to avoid spelling mistakes
• The music works within my Animation 
• Good concept