Playblasts of Shots 6, 7 and 8 from Scene 3 (with audio)

I have animated playblasts for scene 3. I have come across a problem though, in shot 7 his mouth keeps moving away from his body? Not sure how to resolve this?

Since talking with Alan a while back, he gave me advice on how to improve my scenes. For example in shot 6, rather than have him falling onto the 'pebble shapes', the camera zooms to the left to find him.

In shot 8 Alan suggested that I wouldn't the shapes to form a smiley face. So Instead, I've have made the shapes flip the mountain king vertically. This makes the king fall into the next shot with the sea of shapes. Any more advice on how to improve these shots is always appreciated.

Scene 3 - Playblasts from Jennifer Ball on Vimeo.

The Making of the Call - Front Page Idea

I wanted the front page to reflect the style of my animation. I think it works well at showing a glimpse of the Mountain Kings world. However, It may be a bit too busy and confusing to look at?

Shot 5 - Improved @Phil

I've added extra eye movement and more secondary actions as he swings. I've tried to point his feet downwards to work with gravity more!

Rocking_side_to_side_playblast_improved from Jennifer Ball on Vimeo.

Shot 5 - Rocking on 'horn shape' (playblast no sound)

Render from shot

Rocking_on_horn_shape_playblast_01 from Jennifer Ball on Vimeo.

Nuke Lesson 02 - Visual Presentation (snapshots)

I've really enjoyed learning about this new software. I am keeping snap shots from the lessons to help me remember what I've learnt.

Short and low quality playblast - The King falling onto the horn (with audio)

Falling_onto_horn_Playblast_01 from Jennifer Ball on Vimeo.

Multiple Kings on 'Horn Shapes' - Video with Audio

Rendered using Maya

King Multiplied Test Run 01 from Jennifer Ball on Vimeo.