Wednesday, 29 March 2017

Feedback from the Pitch

  • More Kinetic movements
  • Labels to be added within the white space of my background - explaining the cell cycle process. This will ensure the the audience know exactly what is going on 
  • Less marble run repetition towards the end of the animation
  • To proof read my work to avoid spelling mistakes
  • The music works within my Animation 
  • Good concept

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