Hey Jen - well done on mixing this up and pushing towards something much more dynamic and 'animation!!!'
In terms of the ending... I couldn't help feeling that maybe the old 'it was all a dream' might be more of a 'full stop' - there's something about the end that makes me feel as if on that final crash, we should see the king sit up in bed...
Hey Jen - well done on mixing this up and pushing towards something much more dynamic and 'animation!!!'
ReplyDeleteIn terms of the ending... I couldn't help feeling that maybe the old 'it was all a dream' might be more of a 'full stop' - there's something about the end that makes me feel as if on that final crash, we should see the king sit up in bed...